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Perfect Storm

Perfect Storm

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Season Ticket sales looking great Great manager in place Everyone pulling in the right direction If ever was the time to have a punt on the squad it’s now I really hope this opportunity isn’t missed Just one season in the premier league before I die Come on Craig You’ve really stepped up Just that last piece of the jigsaw 🤞🙏
 
Season Ticket sales looking great Great manager in place Everyone pulling in the right direction If ever was the time to have a punt on the squad it’s now I really hope this opportunity isn’t missed Just one season in the premier league before I die Come on Craig You’ve really stepped up Just that last piece of the jigsaw 🤞🙏
That was hard to read in one go.
Definitely needs a comma and full stop in there.
 
That was hard to read in one go.
Definitely needs a comma and full stop in there.

Put a full stop before each capital letter and actually you'll find TuTu gave a very powerful paragraph there:

Season Ticket sales looking great.
Great manager in place.
Everyone pulling in the right direction.
If ever was the time to have a punt on the squad it’s now.
I really hope this opportunity isn’t missed.
Just one season in the premier league before I die.
Come on Craig.
You’ve really stepped up.
Just that last piece of the jigsaw.


See? Or you could add non-standard punctuation to make an E.E. Cummings type offering:

Season Ticket. Sales looking great.

Great.

Manager in place.

Everyone - pulling. In the right direction.

If ever was the time to have a punt on the squad.

It’s now.

I really hope this opportunity isn’t missed.

Just.

One.

Season.

In the premier league.

Before I die - Come on Craig.

You’ve really stepped up.

Just.

That last piece of the jigsaw.
 
Perfect Storm means all the factors are in place The one missing is a team but I have a feeling Craig and Peter will get this right They have to to build on the optimism
It has negative connotations though:

 
Put a full stop before each capital letter and actually you'll find TuTu gave a very powerful paragraph there:

Season Ticket sales looking great.
Great manager in place.
Everyone pulling in the right direction.
If ever was the time to have a punt on the squad it’s now.
I really hope this opportunity isn’t missed.
Just one season in the premier league before I die.
Come on Craig.
You’ve really stepped up.
Just that last piece of the jigsaw.


See? Or you could add non-standard punctuation to make an E.E. Cummings type offering:

Season Ticket. Sales looking great.

Great.

Manager in place.

Everyone - pulling. In the right direction.

If ever was the time to have a punt on the squad.

It’s now.

I really hope this opportunity isn’t missed.

Just.

One.

Season.

In the premier league.

Before I die - Come on Craig.

You’ve really stepped up.

Just.

That last piece of the jigsaw.
Almost a tune, with a bit of tinkering.
 
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